I am a professional photographer and I am in the middle of creating a photo album for my client. This is a photo book or album of George's 1st Birthday party and also some portraits of himself along with his immediate family.
When I do this kind of projects, I usually write some nice words which are appropriate to that event (in this instance - 'Birthday') in between photographs, one on every alternate pages, in no particular order.
For this photo album, I would like to write some real interesting facts/info about George, from his life of past 1 year. I got his parents to write some sentences for me. They have written some facts/milestones from his first year of life, each of them roughly one month apart. Please see the attached file.
My aim is to re-write them in a way to create some 'wow - factor" in readers.
I am planning to insert each sentence in every second or third page, in the given order (open to better ideas)
Dates are given in brackets for reference. But this can be included in the sentences if necessary.